Connective Services Issue 14

Job descriptions and resume that stand out + CFPs earn more

Kevin Sailor
President and CEO

Recruiting is all about interpersonal relationships and finding the right fit. Ironically, those relationships usually start not with face-to-face communication, but with a written document (job description or resume).

Whether you’re a hiring manager or candidate, if you’re still using a boring, boilerplate job description or resume, you’re missing opportunities to find that perfect fit.

In this issue, Jacob shares what he’s learned about how to make these docs stand out, opening doors to new relationships.

- Kevin

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In this issue:

🔎 Exclusive Recruiter Insights: Resume and job description tips

🎈 Just for Fun: Would you hire this candidate?

💡 Associate Spotlight: Greg McDowell

🔎 Exclusive Recruiter Insights

The power of the written word: resume and job description tips

By Jacob Aubel
Executive Recruiter
Find me on LinkedIn

We all know there's so much more to people than what fits on paper. Yet in recruiting, first impressions often come down to words on a screen. Hiring managers craft job descriptions hoping to catch the eye of that perfect candidate. Career seekers pour their professional lives into resumes, hoping to stand out from the stack.

After years of reviewing thousands of resumes and job postings, I've seen what works and what doesn't. Here are the best tips I can offer to those on both sides of the table.

📄 For career seekers: Make your resume count

Stand out with specifics. Your resume needs unique, quantifiable accomplishments. Instead of "Managed client relationships," try "Grew portfolio from $15M to $22M over 18 months while maintaining 98% client retention." Numbers tell a story that generic phrases simply can't.

Avoid the common pitfalls. Skip the objective statement—we know you want the job. Don't list "references available upon request," that's assumed. And please, avoid buzzwords like "results-driven" without backing them up with real examples.

🏢 For hiring managers: Improve your job descriptions!

There is a difference between what job descriptions are supposed to do (attract great candidates) and how they’re written (a long list of skills, requirements, and legal boilerplate.)

Focus on what matters. Instead of looking like every other job description that lists things like “must be able to lift 5-10 pounds and sit at a desk,” tell candidates why they'd want to work there. "We are looking for a Senior Trust Officer. We are a community focused organization that invests in our community and our employees by offering opportunities to attend events, paying for continued education, and offering a hybrid schedule.”

What candidates want to know is why your company is different and what's in it for them.

The written word is your first introduction to candidates. Use it! When we prioritize clarity and what matters to people, we create a connection from the start.

Ready to refine your approach to resumes or job descriptions? I'd love to help you tell your story more effectively. Reach out, and let's make sure your written words are working as hard as you are.

🎈 Just for Fun

Place or pass: Would you hire this candidate?

A wealth management candidate has an MBA from Wharton but spent two years after graduation as a professional poker player. They explain they learned risk management, client psychology, and emotional control under pressure. They're returning to traditional finance because "the skills translate perfectly, and poker taught me when to fold."

Our take: Strong hire. Unconventional background that actually builds relevant skills. Shows they can think independently.

💡 Associate Spotlight

Greg McDowell, an Executive Search Team Lead at Financial Recruiters International and Alexander Raymond, has been a recruiter for almost 20 years. With a background in banking, Greg's strong work ethic and empathy enable him to build lasting relationships with clients and candidates, fulfilling his passion for changing lives through his work.

Originally from Central Illinois, Greg now resides in the Saint Louis area with his wife, Jolene. A proud father and grandfather, he cherishes time with his family, including his son and two grandsons. Greg's personal interests include music, sports, live entertainment, travel, and attending church. He's also a devoted pet owner to two rescue cats, Zeke and George.

📌 Featured Career Opportunities

We’re currently recruiting for a wide variety of roles in fiduciary services, including:

  • Sr. Retirement Plan Administrator

  • Trust Associate

  • Director, Wealth Management

  • Trust Officer Tax Specialist

  • …many, many more

The full list of career opportunities, including locations and next steps, is exclusively available to Connective Services subscribers.

📰 Industry News

CFP professionals earn 13% more and report higher job satisfaction

New research from the CFP Board reveals that certified financial planners earned a median total compensation of $185,000 in 2024 — 13% more than non-certified peers. Additionally, 84% of CFP professionals report being highly fulfilled in their careers, with strong satisfaction ratings for work-life balance and job stability. Explore more findings on InvestmentNews.com >

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🔗 Connect With Your Recruiter

Greg McDowell
Executive Search Team Lead
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Denise Decker
Executive Search Team Lead
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Christie Burgess
Executive Search Team Lead
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Jacob Aubel
Executive Recruiter
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Daniel Jimenez
Executive Recruiter
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Adrian Hernandez
Recruiter
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👋🏼 About Connective Services

Connective Services is a newsletter brought to you by Financial Recruiters International and Alexander Raymond. Both firms are full-cycle recruiting companies connecting fiduciary services organizations with highly skilled candidates. Financial Recruiters International serves the financial sector while Alexander Raymond specializes in insurance and contract staffing.